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sojproductions · 07-10-2012, 09:19 AM

Personally I wouldn't have autoplaying on the video, no reason to either. The font is your biggest problem with that design, the actual font is not a reading font, it's OK for logos but not as body copy, the line heights, letter spacing is all out of whack and strained my eyes.

Also, you last updated on 21st June, don't date it if it's 3 weeks out of date almost, you're putting first time visitors off as they won't get past the date to read 20 new vids. Spread them out and have a list.

Finally, I think you have too much going on on page 1, video thumbs, featured models, webcam benefits, then when i hit continue tour there's only one video to see and nothing else. Webcam features and the exclusive vid / pic banners deserve their own area and in more detail.

Nothing wrong with the colours and headers, it's a little wide for my taste as my eye has too far to travel left to right.

Hope this helps!

07-10-2012, 09:19 AM
sojproductions Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 2,160	Personally I wouldn't have autoplaying on the video, no reason to either. The font is your biggest problem with that design, the actual font is not a reading font, it's OK for logos but not as body copy, the line heights, letter spacing is all out of whack and strained my eyes. Also, you last updated on 21st June, don't date it if it's 3 weeks out of date almost, you're putting first time visitors off as they won't get past the date to read 20 new vids. Spread them out and have a list. Finally, I think you have too much going on on page 1, video thumbs, featured models, webcam benefits, then when i hit continue tour there's only one video to see and nothing else. Webcam features and the exclusive vid / pic banners deserve their own area and in more detail. Nothing wrong with the colours and headers, it's a little wide for my taste as my eye has too far to travel left to right. Hope this helps! __________________ ICQ: 404-159-022 Blue Pixels Profits - Uk Solo Tranny sites & Crossdressing! Filthy Profits - Uk MILF Solo Sites Last edited by sojproductions; 07-10-2012 at 09:22 AM..