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Review of your review :
Good: Loads to chose from. - WTF does this mean?
Medium: Good for those into tease. - meaning?
Bad: Nothing I could find. - ok? None or '-' would suffice here
Correct your grammar, the beginning of a sentence = CAPITAL letter.
'Value of money' - Value for money.
Make use of bullet points, people want a summary when it comes to basic points ie costs.
Overall not bad for skeletor.
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