As millions watch Tube resolution which is crap, I think the resolution is the least important thing. Even when it comes to selling. what's important is the actualt content and what it's trying to achieve.
I watched it and have some very interesting screen grabs. Not sure if I should point out the flaws to you. But will point them out to others so they don't make the same mistakes. So Cherry, you can stick your reply where the sun don't shine, you will never learn. Others may it may help.
Make sure your cheap lights are well away from the model. Get better lights, with more power.
When editing know what you're doing. The girl needs to go right out and then fade back in. Not as this scene has been edited.
Have stockings without holes and ladders.
Remove labels from underwear. Also go out and spend money on some great underwear, using what's in the models bag is great for shooting amateur. trying to shoot anything better, well then you need to have something for her and still in the wrappers. So she starts from the beginning knowing you're serious.
Hold the girls attention 100%, nothing should distract her so she looks away unless it's an integral part of the scene.
Bad framing, it's not on anything specific. Cuts her foot and ass and isn't a close up. Shoot on a tripod with a floating head and make sure every sequence is rehearsed and and re-shot until it's right for this kind of scene.
Get a girl with a more attractive genitalia and take a razor and foam to the shoot.
See above re framing, rehearsing and shaving.
A girl with flawless skin and a sun tan is essential for this scene. A girl with this skin tone should never be shot against a white wall.
See above re shaving and genitalia. IMO she's just been fucked hard as her labia are swollen, or just a pussy too ugly for this style of scene.
Yellow jells on a white back ground and pale model. = Gross amateur. Use jells which will warm the scene not make her look jaundiced.
As she walks off she shows what she thinks of the entire project. IMO She's laughing at the entire thing. Clearly not understanding what it was about, involve the model in what you're trying to achieve. Also cut it without revealing you can't afford decent lights.
I see what Cherry is trying to do here. Clearly his lack of experience, knowledge, training and budget are letting him down and stopping him from achieving the right effect.
Just because you can drive, never assume you can compete in a F1 Grand Prix. It takes years of experience, knowledge, training and budget plus some real skills. Know you're limits and do the best you can within them.
To shoot this properly you need, a great model who can do this kind of work, a location that sets a mood, the right equipment, music that matches the mood you're trying to set, a day at least to shoot it in.
These are all essential, otherwise you'll end up with something like this. And worried if it's in the right resolution.
Otherwise get her to lay on a couch and shove fingers, dildos and massagers up and on her pussy, till the massager takes her out of faking it and into enjoying herself. While she teases the fuck out of the shooter, so the audience up being teased.
I know my limits and skills and stayed close to them.