Originally Posted by nyasswebsite

Wow... A lot of back and forth since I last seen the thread. I feel me talking about the e-book at hand would be going off topic now. lmao. Anyway...

I have not read all of it but from what I see it has the makings to be pretty good! Just some suggestions...

1) I know it’s not complete but it really should be proofread. Part of it was an eyesore to read. lol. I’m sure once you have it in e-book format you will have worked that out.

2) Your section about the 29 poses is a great idea for the eBook. To make it better I say you use a girl or two from your website to demonstrate all positions for each one mentioned.

3) Although you mention things like umbrella, extra battery, snacks for the set, I think you should run with that idea and get more in depth. For example a chapter or sub chapter called "Things you should have on set to make the model more comfortable" and you can include things like Anal douche, vaginal wipes, lube, baby wipes, razors, shaving cream, disposable toothbrushes (Colgate wisp), liquid soap, body puff (you do want a female clean before filming), etc etc etc. Its not going to break the bank or put a real dent in the budget, things I’m talking about would not even total $100 if bargain shopped and would make for a pleasant experience. To even bank from it I say you include links in you ebook to these products and link up with an affiliate like drugstore.com, walmart, riteaid, wal greens, etc.

Pretty good stuff!