Could you guys critque this please..!!

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  • da1uwant2meet
    Confirmed User
    • Jun 2005
    • 104

    #1

    Could you guys critque this please..!!

    I will be uploading images later today but overall can you tell me what you think!!!
    http://www.twistedbydesigns.com/thoseboysarehot/#
    Last edited by da1uwant2meet; 04-25-2007, 04:26 AM.
  • Angelo22
    Writer
    • Feb 2007
    • 3123

    #2
    once again: its pretty much gay
    gay color designs
    gay layout
    gay everything


    good job i guess =)
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    • da1uwant2meet
      Confirmed User
      • Jun 2005
      • 104

      #3
      lol..lol..lol..thanks!

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      • VicD
        ICQ: 304-611-162
        • Feb 2005
        • 13245

        #4
        for a twink site its ok

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        • yahoo-xxx-girls.com
          Confirmed User
          • Jul 2006
          • 3143

          #5
          Hi da1uwant2meet

          I like your overall layout, however there are several points...

          1.) Since you want to have a higher chance of surfers clicking on your links, I would suggest only placing your "link block(s)" at the very bottem or by creating another webpage on your site, just for the purpose of displaying such links...

          2.) Where you have indicated the banner spots you will find that when you do actually place banners, in such locations, that the overall layout will not flow right. Too much banners is not a good thing...

          3.) The most valuable part of a website is the first few inches from the top... and your not using it to the full potential...

          4.) Most surfers will not read the text at the very top... because they will be looking at your pictures/movies...

          5.) Friday, Saturday, Sunday, Monday is there, but Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday is not... You have instead Yesterdays and todays leaving out a day...

          6.) "bookmark this site now and return daily for more free porn !" is very long and repeats far too much... shorten it to bookmark or bookmark this site...

          7.) "We have no association and hold no responsibility for the links on this site!s" You need to remove the ! in site!s

          Best of luck,
          sig too big

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          • Gianna Lee
            Registered User
            • May 2007
            • 31

            #6
            I like the layout =)

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            • da1uwant2meet
              Confirmed User
              • Jun 2005
              • 104

              #7
              Thanks

              Thanks for the comments guys!!!!

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