Did you check to see if someone already trademarked the name or words Take Charge?
If you Google the words Take Charge without parenthesis over 157 million results come up, and even in parenthesis, "Take Charge" stills pulls up over 6 million results.
With a simple cursory search I found that American Express owns takecharge.com, and the government runs a healthcare program called Take Charge, plus there are health and nutrition companies that include Take Charge in their trademarks.
EDIT: I see someone else brought up this issue while I was researching this post. You don't want to see your investment go poof - so make sure that you, or better yet your trademark attorney, do the appropriate due diligence.
Anyway, the second design looks better, but still needs a lot of work. If you already have a distribution deal, why not hire a real graphic designer to design the logo and create the package design for you?
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