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Old 08-22-2010, 10:31 AM  
Barry-xlovecam
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Originally Posted by Adraco
[I]t's not giving a very orderly impression, and I argree on the "it looks funny" part. I wouldn't take this serious at all and either put it back on the shelf if it was in a store or close the browser if it was online. It's not catchy, not interesting, unorderly and just not attractive with the different rows, all centered. ...
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Originally Posted by Amputate Your Head
[A]lso, I agree with what someone else said about the lower copy.... centered down the middle like that makes it a bitch to read, unless it's only a couple of lines, (which it's not). I would try experiment with some left justified layouts if possible. ...
The centering of the descriptive text looks bad.

Oxygen Radical Absorbance Capacity (ORAC) Learned a new "buzz word."

Is the fiber soluble or insoluble, and if both types, what is the ratio?

Sounds* likes "soylent green" without the protein ...

Idea: Sell a protein powder with this and claim a fast weight loss routine.

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