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Old 08-13-2010, 11:23 AM  
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Almost..almost
This is improper structure.

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And that should be "assholes", not "ass holes". Damn! You can't even get your pathetic attempts at insults right! Is English a second language for you by chance?
Is it a second language for you?

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we don' react like that!
"don'" is not a word.

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like an earwig............................................ ........................
This is improper use of puncuation.

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I s'pose you know what an earwig is................................................ ..................
Further improper punctuation. Additional made up words.

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Earwigs don't really do what the old novels say they do but the thoughts which I have implanted in whatever you have that passes for a brain will worm themselves around like an infestation of maggots, eating at you nerve endings,
"eating at you nerve endings" The proper word is "your".

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your thoughts and your consciousness. I want you to think of myself, tall and thin, well-endowed, long and lean with my GF; a petite, only tall enough to come just up to my nipples...........................
Further improper punctuation.

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.........and what she does and she has a great tongue and a wonderful taste!
Further improper punctuation.

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I want you to think of her blue eyes, her perky little boobs and her blonde hair as it ripples like a flag in the wind as we enjoy each other........................................her eyes when she comes..............
Gross misuse of punctuation.

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...........and you will know that you will never; not now, not ever; NEVER experience anything like it.
Punctuation again.

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And you will wish for the earwig.

Sally.
Sentence fragment.



Now, shut your fucking high & mighty word hole douchebag.
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