Originally Posted by Paul Markham

A big improvement on what you did before, even the girl looked more interested.

If you can afford better lighting go for it, if not bounce it off anything white. The only problem is the more you bounce the the more you reduce the light. What's your budget and are your shooting in a country where shooting porn is legal?

Could make a difference, the more light the greater the chance of attracting attention.

Work on your light balance.

IMO you need a script, does not need to be much but it gives the scene some meaning an identity. If only filming the girl walking along the street.

Also has to have sound.