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Old 01-18-2010, 09:56 AM  
DamianJ
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i appreciate both your opinions. I did prepare myself for the harshness of some of your comments and that is exactly what i am looking for.
Brilliant. How refreshing! It's really good to see someone not getting sulky because someone else thinks their site could be improved!

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I decided on a template site for the simple reason that i am trying to sell SEO and Copywriting solutions not that of web design or graphics.
And that is a fine decision to make. However, you need to think about how people perceive you. If it looks like your shop is just a trestle table you borrowed and threw an old sheet over, then is it going to be the BEST place to find QUALITY? Unlikely.

First impressions count.

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There is no need for a comma after Canadian, but it doesn't as well make it wrong that i used it there. Writing is very subjective.
Grammar isn't subjective. And you never put a comma before the word 'and'.

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Again I do really appreciate the honest opinion as i am trying to improve my site. I am trying to stay away from making it to flashy as I want that the focus stay on Copywriting.
No one is suggesting flashy, but just make it look like you spent more than five bucks on it.
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