My New Xbiz AD .. not bad ..kinda fun .. what do you think? (PIC)**

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  • MikeVega
    **Porntrepreneur**
    • Jul 2004
    • 12788

    #1

    My New Xbiz AD .. not bad ..kinda fun .. what do you think? (PIC)**

    this is the Ad I ran this month in Xbiz. again we did it on a crunch but i think it's fun .. If i had the time I would have made a few changes but over all i give it a 7-10 ... what do you think?



    Mike Vega-ICQ:253868499-AIM:mikeydicevega
  • edgeprod
    Permanently Gone
    • Mar 2004
    • 10019

    #2
    Don't get sued by Rockstar!

    Josie looks about 7 in that picture ....

    But otherwise, shit, I'd play the Mob Bucks game for sure.

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    • MikeVega
      **Porntrepreneur**
      • Jul 2004
      • 12788

      #3
      Originally posted by edgeprod
      Don't get sued by Rockstar!

      Josie looks about 7 in that picture ....

      But otherwise, shit, I'd play the Mob Bucks game for sure.
      Rockstar don't care about little old me .. I hope

      and yeah ... my wife said the same about Josie ... the effect makes it worse then the pic set. My designer kinda went MIA for a day or so plus i was running around so i got it about 45mins before the absolute deadline .. i took it as is but would have changed a few things ...

      notice the face at the bottom is juicy .. he always works his way into my ads ..


      Mike Vega-ICQ:253868499-AIM:mikeydicevega

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      • edgeprod
        Permanently Gone
        • Mar 2004
        • 10019

        #4
        Originally posted by MikeVega
        Rockstar don't care about little old me .. I hope
        Here's hoping!

        Originally posted by MikeVega
        notice the face at the bottom is juicy .. he always works his way into my ads ..
        Haha, shit, I didn't even notice!!! Nice.

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        • reynold
          Too lazy to set a custom title
          • Oct 2002
          • 51271

          #5
          Looking good, Mike! Good job.

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          • edgeprod
            Permanently Gone
            • Mar 2004
            • 10019

            #6
            Originally posted by reynold
            Looking good, Mike! Good job.
            What do you think about the AD, though?

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            • OG LennyT
              Wall Street Pimp
              • Jun 2003
              • 14345

              #7
              Nice ad, kudos on getting JDL in there too LOL
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              • wyldworx
                So Fucking Banned
                • Dec 2006
                • 5144

                #8
                That is a very healthy looking ad! Stylin and charismatic. Seems like you have incorporated the kind of rockstar/WWE Title fight kind of theme, but of course, your own theme. I like it, gets a tick in my book. Looks proffessional and encapsulates all that is pimpin in my world. Well done, be nice to see how you do with this one!

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                • sltr
                  Confirmed User
                  • Dec 2002
                  • 3191

                  #9
                  what is it advertising?

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                  • erezmoti
                    I scan my content from Penthouse
                    • Dec 2006
                    • 36

                    #10
                    you want pretend to be mafia?
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                    • vod
                      Confirmed User
                      • Jan 2006
                      • 3510

                      #11
                      Originally posted by OG LennyT
                      Nice ad, kudos on getting JDL in there too LOL


                      agreed, Ad looks nice Mike ; MobBucks Rocks


                      Adult Merchant Account

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                      • MikeVega
                        **Porntrepreneur**
                        • Jul 2004
                        • 12788

                        #12
                        Originally posted by sltr
                        what is it advertising?
                        just branding the Mobbucks Part 2 ... sometimes ( like in the next ad) I'll put site caps and list features but sometimes i just want to catch the eye and brand the name ...


                        Mike Vega-ICQ:253868499-AIM:mikeydicevega

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                        • maxcarter101
                          So Fucking Banned
                          • Oct 2006
                          • 666

                          #13
                          Looks like garbage, no offense.

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                          • MikeVega
                            **Porntrepreneur**
                            • Jul 2004
                            • 12788

                            #14
                            Originally posted by maxcarter101
                            Looks like garbage, no offense.
                            that is a poor quality pic (shrunk by GFY ) and it was rushed ... you also have to be familiar with GTA game series ..


                            Mike Vega-ICQ:253868499-AIM:mikeydicevega

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                            • BlueWire
                              Confirmed User
                              • Nov 2004
                              • 4628

                              #15
                              I love the idea...the actual work looks ...ummm...not exactly "professional"

                              But hey...what matters is if it brands yourself the way you want to be branded Everything else is 2ndary

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                              • Jaytown
                                Confirmed User
                                • Nov 2005
                                • 1056

                                #16
                                Originally posted by MikeVega
                                that is a poor quality pic (shrunk by GFY ) and it was rushed ... you also have to be familiar with GTA game series ..
                                no if you click it it expands, I would not have released that but my opinion doesnt matter.

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                                • wdsguy
                                  Ryde or Die
                                  • Dec 2002
                                  • 19568

                                  #17
                                  Looks cheesy on my screen.

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                                  • MikeVega
                                    **Porntrepreneur**
                                    • Jul 2004
                                    • 12788

                                    #18
                                    Originally posted by Jaytown
                                    no if you click it it expands, I would not have released that but my opinion doesnt matter.
                                    I don't disagree .. the concept was good but i could tell it was rushed by the designer and i got it 5 days late ... in fact i got it 45mins before the absolute deadline to upload it to xbiz. I was kinda forced to use it as is .. needless to say I'm not happy with the designer ... but you live and learn .. i think in print it will serve it's function


                                    Mike Vega-ICQ:253868499-AIM:mikeydicevega

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