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  • spacedog
    Yes that IS me. Bitch.
    • Nov 2001
    • 14149
    #1

    Who wants to be a critic :)

    So, what do you think of the new site?
    I need feedback.. what's good, what's bad.. what needs help..

    Do you think it'll sell?

    it's version 2.

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    • Violetta
      Affiliate
      • Jul 2004
      • 28735
      #2
      This one could need some better photoshopping...

      M&A Queen

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        • spacedog
          Yes that IS me. Bitch.
          • Nov 2001
          • 14149
          #3
          Originally posted by Rockatansky
          This one could need some better photoshopping...
          thanks.. I'll probably pic a different image that's easier to cut out,.

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            • Mediachick
              Confirmed User
              • May 2006
              • 897
              #4
              Its simple, but I like it... Nice girls good design You should put more stuff to the tour though
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                • who
                  So Fucking Banned
                  • Aug 2003
                  • 19593
                  #5
                  I want to say that I expected more 'cherryness' if it makes sense. Other than that - looks normal. Good luck,.

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                    • PHP-CODER-FOR-HIRE
                      Confirmed User
                      • Nov 2006
                      • 1090
                      #6
                      Other than the fact that the last polaroid picture I saw didnt have a drop shadow, i HATE the sparkles over the nipples...but pretty decent simple-looking page overall

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                        • Z
                          Vidi Vici Veni
                          • Nov 2002
                          • 6308
                          #7
                          Good little page, but I'd use higher resolution photos if it were me.

                          Overall though...good work!

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                            • abyss_al
                              **LOOKING FOR TRADES**
                              • Oct 2003
                              • 15605
                              #8
                              -alignment of images are off
                              -left thumbs are cropped wrong (warped pics)
                              -too many different fonts
                              -too many cherries on header
                              -gap between header and top url too thick
                              -home page: only one side has white border, left missing it
                              -too much flashing everywhere
                              -font/bevel/drop shadow are weak
                              -text on continue page difficult to read and too long.. break it up into short sections
                              -too many hearts in logo... maybe remove them and use a couple of cherries? (to matc theme/name)
                              -join page pic = bad crop

                              needs alot of work... hope this helps
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                                • BitAudioVideo
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Jul 2005
                                  • 1246
                                  #9
                                  Originally posted by abyss_al
                                  -alignment of images are off
                                  -left thumbs are cropped wrong (warped pics)
                                  -too many different fonts
                                  -too many cherries on header
                                  -gap between header and top url too thick
                                  -home page: only one side has white border, left missing it
                                  -too much flashing everywhere
                                  -font/bevel/drop shadow are weak
                                  -text on continue page difficult to read and too long.. break it up into short sections
                                  -too many hearts in logo... maybe remove them and use a couple of cherries? (to matc theme/name)
                                  -join page pic = bad crop

                                  needs alot of work... hope this helps
                                  harsh review but i agree with a good bit of it..
                                  specifically too many fonts in use
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                                    • E$_manager
                                      Too lazy to set a custom title
                                      • Apr 2006
                                      • 13557
                                      #10
                                      Not professional look: Very nice, a little bit flashy and disturbing. But gamma is great.
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                                        • just_beginner
                                          Confirmed User
                                          • Sep 2004
                                          • 469
                                          #11
                                          is this for paysite??? if so - design really sucks...

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                                            • Mrs. ForteCash
                                              Registered User
                                              • Dec 2006
                                              • 35
                                              #12
                                              I think everything you do is perfect.
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                                                • spacedog
                                                  Yes that IS me. Bitch.
                                                  • Nov 2001
                                                  • 14149
                                                  #13
                                                  Originally posted by abyss_al
                                                  -alignment of images are off
                                                  -left thumbs are cropped wrong (warped pics)
                                                  -too many different fonts
                                                  -too many cherries on header
                                                  -gap between header and top url too thick
                                                  -home page: only one side has white border, left missing it
                                                  -too much flashing everywhere
                                                  -font/bevel/drop shadow are weak
                                                  -text on continue page difficult to read and too long.. break it up into short sections
                                                  -too many hearts in logo... maybe remove them and use a couple of cherries? (to matc theme/name)
                                                  -join page pic = bad crop

                                                  needs alot of work... hope this helps

                                                  Thanks for the constructive input..

                                                  I'm back to the drawing board.

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                                                    • spacedog
                                                      Yes that IS me. Bitch.
                                                      • Nov 2001
                                                      • 14149
                                                      #14
                                                      ok.. I changed header font.. got rid of the hearts, dropped some cherries.. changed some font, & got rid of flashy click here.. & tightened gap at top.

                                                      I know about the other page, but that's left over from version 1.. I still havent worked on the rest of it, just main page.

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                                                        • abyss_al
                                                          **LOOKING FOR TRADES**
                                                          • Oct 2003
                                                          • 15605
                                                          #15
                                                          Originally posted by spacedog
                                                          ok.. I changed header font.. got rid of the hearts, dropped some cherries.. changed some font, & got rid of flashy click here.. & tightened gap at top.

                                                          I know about the other page, but that's left over from version 1.. I still havent worked on the rest of it, just main page.


                                                          getting better... keep going

                                                          try this format:

                                                          EMAIL: allen @ vasmediagroup.com | ICQ: 311329761 | SKYPE: abyss.al | AIM: xABYSSxALx

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                                                            • StuBradley
                                                              Confirmed User
                                                              • Jul 2002
                                                              • 2625
                                                              #16
                                                              hmmm...well it looks like you spent about 50 bucks on the design. surfers are a lot more discriminant these days. they know that if a site has a poor design on the tour, the member's area probably sucks ass.

                                                              there are no full sized sample pictures or videos that i could see and the "continue" button goes pretty much straight to the join page. don't expect many sales.


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                                                                • gfx3
                                                                  Confirmed User
                                                                  • Nov 2005
                                                                  • 1685
                                                                  #17
                                                                  I found some cherries http://www.sxc.hu/pic/m/s/sh/shibuya...ries_photo.jpg now you must have the skills to use them

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                                                                    • spacedog
                                                                      Yes that IS me. Bitch.
                                                                      • Nov 2001
                                                                      • 14149
                                                                      #18
                                                                      Originally posted by StuBradley
                                                                      hmmm...well it looks like you spent about 50 bucks on the design. surfers are a lot more discriminant these days. they know that if a site has a poor design on the tour, the member's area probably sucks ass.

                                                                      there are no full sized sample pictures or videos that i could see and the "continue" button goes pretty much straight to the join page. don't expect many sales.

                                                                      that's because I haven't built the other pages yet... I am focusing on this page right now, because this page will be the template for the following tour pages... I linked it to what it is, because, well because it needed to be linked to something.

                                                                      Also, there are no full sized samples because I did not link to them yet.. That will be the last thing I do, once I am done laying it out.


                                                                      Perhaps I should've used the term page instead of site... However, I am considering adding more rows of thumbs & using a single page tour, or maybe just two pages


                                                                      btw, this is my 2nd attempt.. the original version has splash, 5 tour pages + join,,


                                                                      this is only the first page I've built on version #2.. just figured I'd ask for input so I can revise
                                                                      Last edited by spacedog; 12-11-2006, 04:29 PM.

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                                                                        • spacedog
                                                                          Yes that IS me. Bitch.
                                                                          • Nov 2001
                                                                          • 14149
                                                                          #19
                                                                          Originally posted by abyss_al
                                                                          getting better... keep going

                                                                          try this format:

                                                                          alright.. I'll give that a shot & see .. thanks..

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                                                                            • madawgz
                                                                              8.8.8.8
                                                                              • Mar 2006
                                                                              • 30509
                                                                              #20
                                                                              the girls look great!
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                                                                                • spacedog
                                                                                  Yes that IS me. Bitch.
                                                                                  • Nov 2001
                                                                                  • 14149
                                                                                  #21
                                                                                  hey all.. thanks everyone for all the great input.. I revised the one page & I fucking love it

                                                                                  Coming much better..

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                                                                                    • shekinah
                                                                                      Confirmed User
                                                                                      • May 2006
                                                                                      • 8452
                                                                                      #22
                                                                                      I like the back color, very girly

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                                                                                        • abyss_al
                                                                                          **LOOKING FOR TRADES**
                                                                                          • Oct 2003
                                                                                          • 15605
                                                                                          #23
                                                                                          Originally posted by spacedog
                                                                                          hey all.. thanks everyone for all the great input.. I revised the one page & I fucking love it

                                                                                          Coming much better..


                                                                                          looks much much better
                                                                                          EMAIL: allen @ vasmediagroup.com | ICQ: 311329761 | SKYPE: abyss.al | AIM: xABYSSxALx

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                                                                                            • CaptainHowdy
                                                                                              Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                                              • Dec 2004
                                                                                              • 94193
                                                                                              #24
                                                                                              Looks good, spacedog! I would work on the logo and the fonts you're using a little bit more...

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                                                                                                • RawAlex
                                                                                                  So Fucking Banned
                                                                                                  • Oct 2003
                                                                                                  • 9465
                                                                                                  #25
                                                                                                  Okay, here is my critical view of things:

                                                                                                  1 - the colors of the logos, cherries, etc are all too muted and dull. Nothing stands out. The site isn't vibrant looking, it looks very washed out.

                                                                                                  2 - the second girl you feature, the images are not very vibrant either. A blonde waifish girl with no tan wearing black on a black and white bed is dull city. Maybe a nice photoset, but it isn't exciting to look at.

                                                                                                  3 - No tag line. What are you selling here? Right that the top, say something, anything... "First time net girls getting wild!" ... anything that gives you site an instant identity. Right now it is very wishy-washy, hard to determine exactly what you site is about - especially getting that message out "above the fold" ie: above where the screen would scroll for most people.

                                                                                                  overall, the site is muted, the colors are washed out, the girls pictures are not "hot", and generally I can't say from looking at your site what it is really about, except "another site with naked girls".

                                                                                                  Good lick with it.

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                                                                                                    • bizman2960
                                                                                                      Confirmed User
                                                                                                      • Nov 2006
                                                                                                      • 358
                                                                                                      #26
                                                                                                      Looks good. But I would swap out the top girl.
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