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  • vegadude
    Registered User
    • Nov 2006
    • 7

    #1

    please critique my site

    1darkfantasy.da.ru let me know what i did wrong or right.
  • Bozena X
    Confirmed User
    • Jul 2006
    • 1139

    #2
    it is not good. You could stand to purchase a template or something from one of the sites around here, as it seems your web design skills aren't too advanced. It just looks very amateurish, and there are lots of random things that dont need to be there such as the random einstein gif at the top lol.

    Look around the board, and see some other peoples quality sites. That will give you at least an idea of what you should shoot for.

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    • lukeump
      Confirmed User
      • Nov 2006
      • 366

      #3
      I have to agree, the site is pretty bad. It's far to busy, there is to much going on. Definately get rid of the background and change the text colour, it's so bright you can barely read it.

      Instead of packing your site full of crap, just draw then visitors attention to one main focus, your galleries, thats where the money is. Think, simple but effective.
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      • Fetish Gimp
        Confirmed User
        • Feb 2005
        • 1699

        #4
        Takes me back to geocities circa 1997.
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        • Himuro
          Confirmed User
          • Nov 2006
          • 934

          #5
          background is not too good

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          • DjSap
            Confirmed User
            • Jul 2002
            • 3869

            #6
            holy mother of god i havent seen anything that bad since i started using the internet 10 years ago...
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            • TGPturnkeys
              Confirmed User
              • Oct 2006
              • 879

              #7
              clickable link for you: http://1darkfantasy.da.ru/
              you need:
              1. hosting!!! forget about free russian hosting!! I don't think that you can post your gallery somewhere..
              2. buy a design for your gallery
              3. never use iframes or other shit on the galleries

              good luck!

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              • RTP
                aka Jimmy James
                • Nov 2006
                • 1335

                #8
                Originally posted by vegadude
                1darkfantasy.da.ru let me know what i did wrong or right.
                dude thats kinda hurting on the eyes, sign up with some good affs that have tools for you some even have hosting (as long as you push thier stuff), or even start a blog maybe as a foundation, at least the design is modern and ready for you to play with..gluck!
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                • BennyX
                  Confirmed User
                  • Sep 2005
                  • 1387

                  #9
                  terrible bad sorry...

                  hurting my eyes...
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