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  • snaker
    Confirmed User
    • Mar 2005
    • 1281

    #1

    Critique this tour...

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  • SIK
    Confirmed User
    • Dec 2006
    • 1497

    #2
    Animated gifs in 2009.?

    Sucks all together btw, unless you're aiming for that "amateur look will bring sales" thing
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    • Xxaru Media
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      • Jan 2008
      • 255

      #3
      Yeah, get rid of the gifs and get some trailers.
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      • Young
        Bland for life
        • Nov 2004
        • 10468

        #4
        i like the simplicity. not familiar with the niche and not a big fan so i can't really critique your choice of thumbs. kill the animated gif's though and replace it with some flash video.
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        • TeenCat
          Too lazy to set a koala
          • Jan 2007
          • 16131

          #5
          what they said ... and maybe some decent background ... looks to empty too me ... but wish you luck with it!

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          • NaughtyRob
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            • Nov 2004
            • 29602

            #6
            Looks very "girlfriend" site style. And amateur. I like it.
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            • mmcfadden
              So Fucking Banned
              • Oct 2008
              • 5099

              #7
              i think it would work... the massive jizz at the end i would keep as a gif... the others maybe change to a trailor

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              • devine
                Confirmed User
                • Jul 2006
                • 620

                #8
                I'd use flv instead of gifs and maybe add a bg to the nav and some kind of limit to the main table, either a border or a diff bg color. Anyway, it looks really simple and good, well done

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                • snaker
                  Confirmed User
                  • Mar 2005
                  • 1281

                  #9
                  thanks all!
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                  • Ozarkz
                    So Fucking Banned
                    • Jan 2009
                    • 2377

                    #10
                    All it is right now is a layout.. Which is good because it's standard.. At a couple of flashy borders and backgrounds and you are good to go :P

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                    • nolongerexists
                      Confirmed User
                      • Apr 2003
                      • 1096

                      #11
                      it's content that counts not some bling bling tour you see on 3/4 of paysites.. :-)
                      I like its simplicity - and content rocks

                      and i feel these gifs are the key to keep.. you can switch to flv but i bet they bring sales :-)
                      Last edited by nolongerexists; 02-09-2009, 01:18 AM.
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                      • StaceyJo
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                        • Mar 2008
                        • 8960

                        #12
                        Looking good.
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                        • tranza
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                          • Jun 2003
                          • 57559

                          #13
                          It looks ok for amateur niche...
                          I'm just a newbie.

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                          • DamageX
                            Marketing & Strategy
                            • Jun 2001
                            • 14293

                            #14
                            KISS is good.

                            This thumb is scary though:

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                            • Xxaru Media
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                              • Jan 2008
                              • 255

                              #15
                              Originally posted by blindzior
                              it's content that counts not some bling bling tour you see on 3/4 of paysites.. :-)
                              I like its simplicity - and content rocks
                              And exactly how can you tell if the content is any good from looking at a 3 second gif??
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                              • gleem
                                Confirmed User
                                • Jun 2001
                                • 5593

                                #16
                                I like the look of the tour nice and amateur up my alley, just a bit on the white side though... put some color in your template.




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                                • alexchechs
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • May 2008
                                  • 3474

                                  #17
                                  Definitly needs some video clips and some rollover action on links. Plus I think in general it needs a "container" not just having everything float around in white space. It doesnt let your eye focus unless the content is contained well...
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                                  • M0nk
                                    Confirmed User
                                    • Feb 2007
                                    • 3502

                                    #18
                                    kill those animated gifs for the love of god! we are in 2009!
                                    maybe some nice trailers or something.....
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                                    • MrDeiz
                                      • May 2008
                                      • 9802

                                      #19
                                      i like how your tour looks

                                      anyway content is a king in your case
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                                      • WhiplashDug
                                        ICS Graphics Dude
                                        • Aug 2006
                                        • 3438

                                        #20
                                        Originally posted by TeenCat
                                        what they said ... and maybe some decent background ... looks to empty too me ... but wish you luck with it!


                                        Too much negative space.
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                                        • TDF
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                                          • Mar 2002
                                          • 27296

                                          #21
                                          why show the cumshot? isnt that the whole point of enticing the surfer to sign up
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                                          • Reak AGV
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                                            • Dec 2004
                                            • 4283

                                            #22
                                            It's pretty white and the menu isn't all that easy to read

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                                              • Jan 2004
                                              • 16502

                                              #23
                                              Why's everyone saying replace the GIF with a FLV? do you understand the FLV will show exactly what the GIF does? It's all just a format.

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                                              • Twistys Tim
                                                Confirmed User
                                                • Apr 2008
                                                • 1923

                                                #24
                                                Took ages to load with all the gifs.

                                                Also, I hit the join now button, which took me to a join page, where I had to choose my billing option, which then took me to the CCBill page that asked me for my billing option, which then took me to the join form.

                                                Too many stages and clicks. If your surfer hits the join button, let them join!


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                                                • John-ACWM
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                                                  • Nov 2008
                                                  • 20060

                                                  #25
                                                  Great for a porn site

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                                                  • Ozarkz
                                                    So Fucking Banned
                                                    • Jan 2009
                                                    • 2377

                                                    #26
                                                    Starting like this is the best way to learn to design/build tours.

                                                    Work on the content layout and then add the bling later..

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                                                    • snaker
                                                      Confirmed User
                                                      • Mar 2005
                                                      • 1281

                                                      #27
                                                      Thanks all! Much appreciated...made some changes to the background and you right it look much better. We wanna keep it real amateur to go inline with the content.
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                                                      • Elli
                                                        Reach for those stars!
                                                        • Apr 2003
                                                        • 17991

                                                        #28
                                                        I actually really like the gifs. It gives you an idea of the ending without having to watch a 15 second trailer with sound that might be heard by others in the um.. office.

                                                        The colours are a bit too teeny bopper for the genre, imo.
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