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  • rowan
    Too lazy to set a custom title
    • Mar 2002
    • 17393
    #1

    Please critique my new design!

    Dear fellow webmasters,

    I have been tweaking this new design for the past couple of weeks and I think it's at the point where I am ready to start throwing some real traffic at it. I'm really looking forward to seeing the fruits of my labour, so I would appreciate any comments you have before I make it 100% live. Thank you in advance!

    http://www.digteens.com/newsite.html

    PS: Please be constructive rather than nasty, it's too easy to hurt people's feelings when you're a keyboard warrior.
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    • gimo33
      Confirmed User
      • Mar 2006
      • 5599
      #2
      too many colors dude... try to limit the # of color combinations
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        • Fucksakes
          Shit... Fuck! What the Hell?
          • Dec 2003
          • 7567
          #3
          too much color, blurry pictures, some don't load, red bg hard on eyes, images need to be huge, need more galleries, toplists are nice for trades, a good looking header.

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            • Fucksakes
              Shit... Fuck! What the Hell?
              • Dec 2003
              • 7567
              #4
              nice galleries thou.

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                • XPays
                  Team Player
                  • May 2004
                  • 13002
                  #5
                  this is a joke right

                  nobody could randomly have each of every mistake so perfectly
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                    • Doctor Dre
                      Too lazy to set a custom title
                      • Jan 2001
                      • 51692
                      #6
                      You gotta crop the thumbs proprely... and I think you need to redo everything from A to Z. It just hurts my eyes.
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                      I rebooted, deleted temp files, history, cookies and everything...still cannot view the news clip. All I see is that fucking gay ass music video from "Rick Roll". Anyone else have a different link to the news clip?

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                        • BoyAlley
                          So Fucking Gay
                          • Nov 2004
                          • 19714
                          #7
                          My eyes my eyes my eyes!!!!!!

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                            • candyflip
                              Carpe Visio
                              • Jul 2002
                              • 43073
                              #8
                              I think the line of text at the bottom just about says it all.

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                                • BusterBunny
                                  perverted justice decoy
                                  • Aug 2005
                                  • 19291
                                  #9
                                  Originally posted by Doctor Dre
                                  You gotta crop the thumbs proprely...
                                  at the very least
                                  my sig caught gonoherpasyphilaids and died

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                                    • BAKO
                                      Don’t be a short Imp
                                      • Jul 2005
                                      • 18483
                                      #10
                                      My eyes .......
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                                        • I'm a sig whore
                                          So Fucking Banned
                                          • Jun 2006
                                          • 1399
                                          #11
                                          Originally posted by Fucksakes
                                          too much color, blurry pictures, some don't load, red bg hard on eyes, images need to be huge, need more galleries, toplists are nice for trades, a good looking header.

                                          what he said.

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                                            • rowan
                                              Too lazy to set a custom title
                                              • Mar 2002
                                              • 17393
                                              #12
                                              Thank you GFY! I will do some work on the design later. The prod is already up to 59%, I will be buying 100k of feeder soon!

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                                                • Tanker
                                                  Confirmed User
                                                  • Nov 2000
                                                  • 9287
                                                  #13
                                                  LOL great troll

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                                                    • AmateurFlix
                                                      Confirmed User
                                                      • Jul 2004
                                                      • 7762
                                                      #14
                                                      Holy Rubik's cube batman!

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                                                        • ContentSHOOTER
                                                          Confirmed User
                                                          • Dec 2005
                                                          • 3770
                                                          #15
                                                          The colors are a bit much... I'm sure you will get all the advice you need here to fix it...
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                                                            • aico
                                                              Moo Moo Cow
                                                              • Mar 2004
                                                              • 14748
                                                              #16
                                                              Too many colors, the thumbs are not the same size ratio as what you have so they look squished.

                                                              too bright

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                                                                • -Turk-
                                                                  I gag on GFY Admin's cock!!!
                                                                  • Nov 2005
                                                                  • 350
                                                                  #17
                                                                  omg... stop now. i beg you.
                                                                  the future of our children depend on it!

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                                                                    • Farang
                                                                      one sick puppy
                                                                      • Oct 2004
                                                                      • 11713
                                                                      #18
                                                                      you're not serious, right?
                                                                      fbm

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                                                                        • sigurman
                                                                          Confirmed User
                                                                          • Sep 2004
                                                                          • 665
                                                                          #19
                                                                          looks like a christmas tree...

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                                                                            • justsexxx
                                                                              Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                              • Aug 2001
                                                                              • 13723
                                                                              #20
                                                                              Looks better than your other sites



                                                                              j/k ;-)
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                                                                                • BluewireAngie
                                                                                  Confirmed User
                                                                                  • Apr 2006
                                                                                  • 4643
                                                                                  #21
                                                                                  Too many colors.
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                                                                                    • teg0
                                                                                      Confirmed User
                                                                                      • Jan 2006
                                                                                      • 4204
                                                                                      #22
                                                                                      Too many colors and too many tables as far as code goes. Its not an efficient page. No real basic design, just a lot of things going on. In design, less is more.

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                                                                                        • rowan
                                                                                          Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                                          • Mar 2002
                                                                                          • 17393
                                                                                          #23
                                                                                          Originally posted by teg0
                                                                                          Too many colors and too many tables as far as code goes. Its not an efficient page. No real basic design, just a lot of things going on. In design, less is more.
                                                                                          That's why I used no graphics! I guess I didn't get it quite right then. :-)

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                                                                                            • czarina
                                                                                              Webmaster Extraordinaire
                                                                                              • Jul 2002
                                                                                              • 10751
                                                                                              #24
                                                                                              honey, that's not a site, it's a collection of thumbs and colors.

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                                                                                                • cyberstar
                                                                                                  Confirmed User
                                                                                                  • Mar 2005
                                                                                                  • 1263
                                                                                                  #25
                                                                                                  simple solution - hire a designer! .. problem solved
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                                                                                                    • crockett
                                                                                                      in a van by the river
                                                                                                      • May 2003
                                                                                                      • 76818
                                                                                                      #26
                                                                                                      It hurts my eyes man..
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                                                                                                        • Playa-Deak
                                                                                                          Confirmed User
                                                                                                          • Feb 2005
                                                                                                          • 1065
                                                                                                          #27
                                                                                                          Rowan, I've seen some of your other TGPs... I even use your slothtrader script on my sites... This site here, doesn't seem like something you did... Its rather amateurish... Something that seems it was did in like 1 minute... Scrap it, and do it over and buy a template... My eyes literally are hurting and acting funny...
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                                                                                                            • Mr. Romance
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                                                                                                              • Mar 2005
                                                                                                              • 7821
                                                                                                              #28
                                                                                                              i dig it....



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                                                                                                                • rowan
                                                                                                                  Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                                                                  • Mar 2002
                                                                                                                  • 17393
                                                                                                                  #29
                                                                                                                  Originally posted by Playa-Deak
                                                                                                                  Its rather amateurish...
                                                                                                                  I thought the amateur look converted well?

                                                                                                                  Originally posted by Playa-Deak
                                                                                                                  Something that seems it was did in like 1 minute...
                                                                                                                  Well... it was more like 5...

                                                                                                                  The traffic from GFY has pulled down the average prod, it's only 38.5% now. I am still buying the feeder though! Just you watch! I'm gonna make it big!!!

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                                                                                                                    • MichaelP
                                                                                                                      Registered User
                                                                                                                      • Aug 2003
                                                                                                                      • 7123
                                                                                                                      #30
                                                                                                                      which design ?

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                                                                                                                        • Spunky
                                                                                                                          I need a beer
                                                                                                                          • Jun 2002
                                                                                                                          • 133978
                                                                                                                          #31
                                                                                                                          Time to start over from scratch

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                                                                                                                            • BIGTYMER
                                                                                                                              Junior Achiever
                                                                                                                              • Nov 2004
                                                                                                                              • 17066
                                                                                                                              #32
                                                                                                                              Jeezzz... Where to start?

                                                                                                                              Resize thumbs for better aspect ratio.
                                                                                                                              Reduce thumb size for faster page loads.
                                                                                                                              You have broken images.
                                                                                                                              You have too many colors.
                                                                                                                              You have spelling errors.


                                                                                                                              Funny joke. :D

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                                                                                                                                • belle2003
                                                                                                                                  Registered User
                                                                                                                                  • Jun 2006
                                                                                                                                  • 58
                                                                                                                                  #33
                                                                                                                                  no this is more awesome

                                                                                                                                  check it out immediately mythrillworld.com

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                                                                                                                                    • rowan
                                                                                                                                      Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                                                                                      • Mar 2002
                                                                                                                                      • 17393
                                                                                                                                      #34
                                                                                                                                      This is it GFY. I've poured my heart and soul into this business and now it's finally paying off. I'm rich! Richer than astronauts.

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                                                                                                                                        • BIGTYMER
                                                                                                                                          Junior Achiever
                                                                                                                                          • Nov 2004
                                                                                                                                          • 17066
                                                                                                                                          #35
                                                                                                                                          Originally posted by rowan
                                                                                                                                          This is it GFY. I've poured my heart and soul into this business and now it's finally paying off. I'm rich! Richer than astronauts.
                                                                                                                                          Good to hear! Keep up the talented design work.

                                                                                                                                          You should open your own design site.

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                                                                                                                                            • blazi
                                                                                                                                              Confirmed User
                                                                                                                                              • Feb 2003
                                                                                                                                              • 4321
                                                                                                                                              #36
                                                                                                                                              best design I've seen all year!!

                                                                                                                                              LOL

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                                                                                                                                                • madawgz
                                                                                                                                                  8.8.8.8
                                                                                                                                                  • Mar 2006
                                                                                                                                                  • 30509
                                                                                                                                                  #37
                                                                                                                                                  um, i think you should let a professional handle it...2c
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                                                                                                                                                    • gandalfuy
                                                                                                                                                      Confirmed User
                                                                                                                                                      • Jun 2005
                                                                                                                                                      • 4686
                                                                                                                                                      #38
                                                                                                                                                      Originally posted by XPays
                                                                                                                                                      this is a joke right

                                                                                                                                                      nobody could randomly have each of every mistake so perfectly
                                                                                                                                                      I'm not back.

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                                                                                                                                                        • gooddomains
                                                                                                                                                          Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                                                                                                          • Jul 2003
                                                                                                                                                          • 10127
                                                                                                                                                          #39
                                                                                                                                                          perfect site

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                                                                                                                                                            • The Sultan Of Smut
                                                                                                                                                              Confirmed User
                                                                                                                                                              • Dec 2004
                                                                                                                                                              • 4325
                                                                                                                                                              #40
                                                                                                                                                              We got a winner!

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                                                                                                                                                                • gandalfuy
                                                                                                                                                                  Confirmed User
                                                                                                                                                                  • Jun 2005
                                                                                                                                                                  • 4686
                                                                                                                                                                  #41
                                                                                                                                                                  but erika, she is so cute:

                                                                                                                                                                  I'm not back.

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                                                                                                                                                                    • PinkElectric
                                                                                                                                                                      So Fucking Banned
                                                                                                                                                                      • Sep 2005
                                                                                                                                                                      • 1064
                                                                                                                                                                      #42
                                                                                                                                                                      Do you use drugs???

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                                                                                                                                                                        • nico-t
                                                                                                                                                                          emperor of my world
                                                                                                                                                                          • Aug 2004
                                                                                                                                                                          • 29901
                                                                                                                                                                          #43
                                                                                                                                                                          Originally posted by Playa-Deak
                                                                                                                                                                          Rowan, I've seen some of your other TGPs... I even use your slothtrader script on my sites... This site here, doesn't seem like something you did... Its rather amateurish... Something that seems it was did in like 1 minute... Scrap it, and do it over and buy a template... My eyes literally are hurting and acting funny...
                                                                                                                                                                          wtf are you serious

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                                                                                                                                                                            • rowan
                                                                                                                                                                              Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                                                                                                                              • Mar 2002
                                                                                                                                                                              • 17393
                                                                                                                                                                              #44
                                                                                                                                                                              Site is for sale, bids start at $300!

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                                                                                                                                                                                • PinkElectric
                                                                                                                                                                                  So Fucking Banned
                                                                                                                                                                                  • Sep 2005
                                                                                                                                                                                  • 1064
                                                                                                                                                                                  #45
                                                                                                                                                                                  Originally posted by rowan
                                                                                                                                                                                  Site is for sale, bids start at $300!
                                                                                                                                                                                  QUE??

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                                                                                                                                                                                    • hova
                                                                                                                                                                                      Traffillionaire
                                                                                                                                                                                      • Jan 2002
                                                                                                                                                                                      • 22430
                                                                                                                                                                                      #46
                                                                                                                                                                                      that's just wrong
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                                                                                                                                                                                        • rowan
                                                                                                                                                                                          Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                                                                                                                                          • Mar 2002
                                                                                                                                                                                          • 17393
                                                                                                                                                                                          #47
                                                                                                                                                                                          Originally posted by PinkElectric
                                                                                                                                                                                          QUE??
                                                                                                                                                                                          Already had an offer of $315 from someone, you gonna better it?

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                                                                                                                                                                                            • MaddCaz
                                                                                                                                                                                              Confirmed User
                                                                                                                                                                                              • Mar 2006
                                                                                                                                                                                              • 9483
                                                                                                                                                                                              #48
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                                                                                                                                                                                                • Kimo
                                                                                                                                                                                                  ...
                                                                                                                                                                                                  • Jan 2006
                                                                                                                                                                                                  • 11542
                                                                                                                                                                                                  #49
                                                                                                                                                                                                  too many colors, red background = NO, and lime green text? is it christmas porn?
                                                                                                                                                                                                  ...

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                                                                                                                                                                                                    • exterminator
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Confirmed User
                                                                                                                                                                                                      • Nov 2005
                                                                                                                                                                                                      • 245
                                                                                                                                                                                                      #50
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Originally posted by cyberstar
                                                                                                                                                                                                      simple solution - hire a designer! .. problem solved
                                                                                                                                                                                                      hmm...maybe i can help with it.
                                                                                                                                                                                                      pls check my portfolio..thanks!

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