feedback on a sample movie

Not bad, looks like she gives a pretty good knob job.

The colors are a bit washed out. Not sure what software you are using, but if you have the ability to make histogram adjustments, you might want to stretch it out a bit, do some equalization, etc. and improve the tonal range. If you can't do it post-production, I'd say find some time to play with lighting and the camera settings so the color is a bit more vivid.

Other thoughts.. all the shots are in really tight, which isn't necessarily bad. Was it intentional?

The camera is stationary the entire time, and the cuts are long. Is the camera just sitting or on a tripod? You could either have the guy getting blown hold the camera and move it around a bit, or have a camera man move around to vary it a bit, or just get creative and shoot from a bunch of different angles. Then take those assets and string them together in post production. Why? Well, people's interest is heightened when the image changes more frequently, they become more engaged with the imagery. Perhaps that's a bit heavy for a BJ scene, but hey you wanted feedback ;)

Overall good stuff, keep it up, put in the time and the creativity will come.

booker, thanks for the feedback, and yeah the camera is moving around etc, for this short sample, i just took some close up's so people could get a better look at the model, and im using premiere so yeah i'll tinker with it and see if it gets better etc, exactly the kind of feedback i want to here. and thanks for the advice.

No prob man.. you have an icq#?

nice clip.