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Old 09-03-2008, 11:09 PM  
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Originally Posted by commonsense View Post
This announcement is confusing as fuck. Try starting with "I would like to announce that XXXXXXX is now the affiliate manager of XXXXXX". There's too much random shit and names in there, and the new site is just shoved in the middle.
Sorry I had the day from hell today but I thought my 1st sentence all by itself was pretty straight forward

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I'm happy to announce that I am now the affiliate manager for Apple Cash!
regardless Apple Cash has some cool new things coming so if you aren't promoting, you should be
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