I am in desperate need of a critique...opinion..anything you got

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  • eroswebmaster
    March 1st, 2003
    • Jul 2001
    • 20295

    #1

    I am in desperate need of a critique...opinion..anything you got

    What I need is an opinion on my site. http://www.teegeepee.com

    I can't seem to break the 300 uniques a day barrier. Shit the last couple of days it has dropped down to about 150 a day.

    What am I doing wrong here?

    If someone could please show me the error of my ways I would forever be in your debt.

    Thanks in advance.

    eros
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  • Exxxotica
    Confirmed User
    • Jan 2001
    • 4396

    #2
    IMO...

    You are leaving out the Power of the Almighty "Blind Link"

    Somtimes "Blind Link" is not an evil term...at least if used correctly.

    Throw a couple of them into your galleries and see what happens.

    Id also put your galleries up top...put the rest of that other stuff aftwards. (fucked up shit of the day, friends of teegeepee), Maybee leave the top refers.


    Needs some really great hosting? Black Seven

    note: I do not work for Blackseven... Im just grateful for their kick ass hosting...so quit bothering them when I hurt your feelings... pussy

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    • The Truth
      Confirmed User
      • Jul 2001
      • 920

      #3
      Alright dude -

      First off, Exxxotica is right but I have a few things to add...

      Put yourself in a surfers shoes... imagine all the TGP's you have ever seen and now you come across your site. I am sure it's your first attempt at a TGP and you are probably pretty proud of it but it really is horrible.

      Every gallery in it's own cell..?? Have you ever seen a TGP do that. The colors and that bold Comic Sans font are the worst.

      Take Exxxotica's advice and put all the extra crap at the bottom. Add some galleries to make the site look like it has some substance. Surf other TGP's for layout ideas. Set some of those table borders to zero.

      If you want clean galleries to fill your site get them from here... http://www.thefuckhole.com

      I hope you don't take my comments to heart. I'm just telling "The Truth"





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      • Makaveli
        Confirmed User
        • Feb 2001
        • 1027

        #4
        Captian P speaks The Truth. Then again The Truth make some really pretty TGP's Gotta make something that surfers will bookmark..

        Peace..

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        • The Truth
          Confirmed User
          • Jul 2001
          • 920

          #5
          Gracias Makaveli -

          I was disappointed to see you may be selling Green Thumbs. It was trading pretty well with one of my sites... until I let it die. I am re-building 3 of them right now cuz of shitty returns.

          They don't need to be pretty but they shouldn't look like your first homepage

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          • Sticks
            Registered User
            • Feb 2001
            • 91

            #6
            1. Why do you have a big fat link labelled Eros to your email address - looking for Spam Why not just make it your bookmark link as well or send to a trade.
            2. Want some more clean galleries? : http://a1-teenpussy.com/galleries/teen.php?all=1 http://a1-teenpussy.com/galleries/redhead.php?all=1 http://a1-teenpussy.com/galleries/asian.php?all=1
            3. Your link "density" is very low because of putting one little piddly link in an entire huge table cell. As a result you will have a very low click through rate. I like to it my own way too, but unfortunately there are certain standard ways, e.g. standard tgp layouts, that will improve your click through rate. Just don't copy anyone else's design.

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            traffic trades
            traffic trades

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            • eroswebmaster
              March 1st, 2003
              • Jul 2001
              • 20295

              #7
              Keep 'em coming...I'm listening and taking notes

              eros
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              • Makaveli
                Confirmed User
                • Feb 2001
                • 1027

                #8
                Captian I'm not selling shit. Just testing the waters Both are trades look alright dude. Your traffic seem productive...

                eros keep it simple and neat bro. The rest is upto you. Good luck..

                Time for some zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

                Peace

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                • Sticks
                  Registered User
                  • Feb 2001
                  • 91

                  #9
                  Sites that really suck can have really productive traffic when sent to another site - the reason is they are clicking like mad on the other site
                  traffic trades

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                  • eroswebmaster
                    March 1st, 2003
                    • Jul 2001
                    • 20295

                    #10
                    Once again thx for the help...I'm taking your advice and changing a bunch of shit around...

                    If anyone else has anything else they would like to add it would be greatly appreciated.

                    eros
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