Not bad, for the genre...certainly nothing groundbreaking or different. It might help if they had a little less repetition, more extended lead runs, and showcased each musicians' actual skills.
The lead singer is a dime a dozen screamer - so, no points there.
As it is, it sounded like lots of very short riffs strung together, rather than a thought out melody, and failed to show if the musicians are masters of their instruments or simply adequate at a few things.
Pretty good video editing, although that too was repetitious at times.
If they want to grow beyond the club circuit, they need to spread their wings more artistically.
ADG