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Originally Posted by prezzz
Looking very good, congrats!
That said, I'd advice you to work a little bit more on copywriting. The intro text could be more appealing (right now it's too generic and small mistakes like 'to' instead of 'too' or 'deserver' don't help, either). Phrases like 'miss no details with my hardcore Videos! I have a lot of them' could be pimped up to make the site even more interesting.
Just my 2 cents.
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You have a very valid point. I was reading through it this morning and some of the typos / grammatical errors were throwing me off a bit.
I will be looking over that, perfection is the only way to go.
Thanks for your input
