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Looking very good, congrats!
That said, I'd advice you to work a little bit more on copywriting. The intro text could be more appealing (right now it's too generic and small mistakes like 'to' instead of 'too' or 'deserver' don't help, either). Phrases like 'miss no details with my hardcore Videos! I have a lot of them' could be pimped up to make the site even more interesting.
Just my 2 cents.
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