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ok, I'll add a little bit of my perspective. Almost nobody, unless he has seen you before and bookmarked you, joins from the first page. You need a join link there, but I don't like to hit them over the head with it. Avoiding the word "join" if you can is good because that immediately teaches the smart surfer he is in a paysite. "get it all now" or something draws bettter, IMO.
Also, your tour link is a little hard to find. Make it stand out, and again I even have an opinion on the word "tour" - it gives surfers the same impression they are at a typical paysite. Be more creative, or follow the amateur style with lots of links - to pictures, videos, bios, whatever you've got.
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