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  • RRRED
    Confirmed User
    • Jan 2001
    • 6754

    #1

    I just wrote a few short poems.... (warning, sad)

    I just did these and I'm going to add them to a few different framed picture collages for my sons family members. This is my first Holiday without my angel.

    He disappeared from our lives exactly 7 months ago today.... along with part of my soul. RIP, my pride and joy, my son, my best friend....

    Let me know what you think of these.... It was pretty rough doing these so I hope they are delicate and appropriate enough to frame with some assorted pics of him as Xmas gifts.


    For his Grandma and Papa:
    I'm in the very air you breathe, in rain, in snow, and the sun... You'll hear my laughter in the wind, somewhere I'm having fun. I don't want you to worry, I'm not in any pain. I'll always have you in my heart until we meet again...

    For his 12 yr old cousin:
    I'm always there to cheer you on, I'm never far away. Thanks for all the thoughts of me and honoring my name. I watched you hit that home run ball. It makes my spirit proud. And if you ever need a friend, just whisper to the clouds...

    For his 10 year old sister:
    The gentle tickle on your arm, the soft breeze on your cheek. I know that when you think of me, your heart gets sad and weak. I love you now and loved you then, don' sit and wonder why. Just close your eyes and feel my love and reach up to the sky...

    For a best friend:
    Whenever you are sad and blue, just think of me and know, that I will be there with you wherever you may go. Throughout the years you were always here. You've been the greatest friend. My spirit will protect you and stand by you till the end...

    For his 9 year old cousin:
    I want you to remember me with laughter and a grin. You wrote that T upon your hat and helped the team to win. Thank you for that honor, Cam, you really made my day. I'll always be beside you as you learn, and grow, and play...

    For another best friend:
    The best friend there could ever be, I always knew you were there for me. When you're sad and feeling blue. Just say my name. I'm there for you. Shed no tears for my soul is at rest, just stand up tall and live life to its best...



    May peace be with all of you this season and especially for those of you who have experienced tragedy or loss this year. I know how debilitating it can be and how painful the constant Christmas rammed down our throats can be...

    I miss you guys! Cherish every moment with your families this year... and every year the best that you can. Life is short... and unpredictable.
  • HAPPYPEEKERS
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    • Feb 2004
    • 7566

    #2
    totally beautiful
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    • HS-Trixxxia
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      • Mar 2002
      • 2946

      #3
      Very touching - I'm sure everyone will be moved and comforted by their gift.

      You are often in my thoughts.

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      • Spunky
        I need a beer
        • Jun 2002
        • 133987

        #4
        Very touching RRRED

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        • needlive
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          • Nov 2006
          • 2191

          #5
          Originally posted by RRRED
          Life is short... and unpredictable.
          Well said.

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          • Shakula
            So Fucking Banned
            • Nov 2006
            • 948

            #6
            Cupid is dead, I cut off his head, in my poor arms he cried, Cupid has died.

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            • RRRED
              Confirmed User
              • Jan 2001
              • 6754

              #7
              Originally posted by Shakula
              Cupid is dead, I cut off his head, in my poor arms he cried, Cupid has died.
              uhm ok......

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              • WiredGuy
                Pounding Googlebot
                • Aug 2002
                • 34512

                #8
                Originally posted by HS-Trixxxia
                You are often in my thoughts.
                Mine too, hope you're doing well Nicole, great poetry and I'm sure very theraputic to express yourself this way.

                WG
                I play with Google.

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                • moogle
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                  • Sep 2007
                  • 314

                  #9
                  it's so sad...and so so beautiful! I almost cried =(


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                  • loreen
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                    • May 2004
                    • 12558

                    #10
                    Very beautiful and deep
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                    • dynastoned
                      mmm yeah!
                      • Feb 2005
                      • 5061

                      #11
                      beautiful rrred.

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                      • spamiam
                        Confirmed User
                        • Mar 2004
                        • 272

                        #12
                        I will also share a few poems

                        Originally posted by RRRED
                        I just did these and I'm going to add them to a few different framed picture collages for my sons family members. This is my first Holiday without my angel.

                        He disappeared from our lives exactly 7 months ago today.... along with part of my soul. RIP, my pride and joy, my son, my best friend....

                        Let me know what you think of these.... It was pretty rough doing these so I hope they are delicate and appropriate enough to frame with some assorted pics of him as Xmas gifts.


                        For his Grandma and Papa:
                        I'm in the very air you breathe, in rain, in snow, and the sun... You'll hear my laughter in the wind, somewhere I'm having fun. I don't want you to worry, I'm not in any pain. I'll always have you in my heart until we meet again...

                        For his 12 yr old cousin:
                        I'm always there to cheer you on, I'm never far away. Thanks for all the thoughts of me and honoring my name. I watched you hit that home run ball. It makes my spirit proud. And if you ever need a friend, just whisper to the clouds...

                        For his 10 year old sister:
                        The gentle tickle on your arm, the soft breeze on your cheek. I know that when you think of me, your heart gets sad and weak. I love you now and loved you then, don' sit and wonder why. Just close your eyes and feel my love and reach up to the sky...

                        For a best friend:
                        Whenever you are sad and blue, just think of me and know, that I will be there with you wherever you may go. Throughout the years you were always here. You've been the greatest friend. My spirit will protect you and stand by you till the end...

                        For his 9 year old cousin:
                        I want you to remember me with laughter and a grin. You wrote that T upon your hat and helped the team to win. Thank you for that honor, Cam, you really made my day. I'll always be beside you as you learn, and grow, and play...

                        For another best friend:
                        The best friend there could ever be, I always knew you were there for me. When you're sad and feeling blue. Just say my name. I'm there for you. Shed no tears for my soul is at rest, just stand up tall and live life to its best...



                        May peace be with all of you this season and especially for those of you who have experienced tragedy or loss this year. I know how debilitating it can be and how painful the constant Christmas rammed down our throats can be...

                        I miss you guys! Cherish every moment with your families this year... and every year the best that you can. Life is short... and unpredictable.














                        A matter of opinion


                        "It's about that time"
                        she said...
                        walked into a crowded room
                        I watched
                        as she held her head high.
                        She walked softly
                        She remembers to smile
                        I observe
                        as im standing
                        beside her
                        A lot of the people in the crowd are just staring
                        I'm thinking that must get annoying
                        It'd make me feel like destroying...
                        "What a pro"
                        As I watch her
                        as she works the room

                        "she is so amazing"
                        As I realized It wasn't even phazing
                        her a bit,
                        She Is
                        As Strong As
                        one can get.

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                        • spamiam
                          Confirmed User
                          • Mar 2004
                          • 272

                          #13
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                          Every single day
                          We have the option
                          To display
                          ADORATION
                          We decide which way to go; by simply applying
                          Humane estimations
                          Bypassing cordial indications

                          An arcane
                          metrical euphemism
                          We exchange "concepts"
                          Discuss the weather
                          DIGNIFY

                          GLORIFY

                          CLASSIFY
                          ADULATE ADVOCCATE MEDICATE

                          Through faith it appears we have found
                          A nation built on denial; in which we are bound

                          Ultimate validation
                          Constitutes the justification
                          That we are only human
                          We are bound to make mistakes

                          As we exploit the weak by pretending to teach
                          "preach" to turn the other cheek

                          Avoiding conversations about her bruises
                          As doctors provide validity behind drugs she uses

                          And so
                          Love turns to hate

                          Trust into blame


                          AS BETRAYAL BECOMES OUR MEANS FOR SURVIVAL
                          With the aide of denial

                          The truth we will forever bury
                          Forgotten are the morals we didn't carry

                          And that is the world
                          To which we pervade
                          "she" looks down on us all
                          As if we were her arcade


                          SHE BURST INTO LAUGHTER
                          With love in her heart

                          She says
                          "I gave them free will"
                          And so they shall start

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                          • nAtuRaLbEautY
                            Confirmed User
                            • May 2006
                            • 6107

                            #14
                            owww..i love it mate. thanks for sharing!!
                            i wanna cry..
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                            • L-Pink
                              working on my tan
                              • Mar 2005
                              • 39151

                              #15
                              Thank you for taking the time to share.

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                              • Halcyon
                                Spread The Pink!
                                • Dec 2002
                                • 8609

                                #16
                                Absolutely Beautiful.
                                HAL on TEDx:

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                                • RRRED
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Jan 2001
                                  • 6754

                                  #17
                                  Thank you Hal.... I've thought about you and your grandpa many times here lately. You do such a great job of honoring him and I know he's very proud of you.

                                  Thanks Trixxxia I've been meaning to get ahold of you. I haven't looked at a single icq in about a month but Doug mentioned he saw you on here....

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