She was very too hot to be working in a gas station.

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  • Pornopat
    AdultTubeSubmits.com
    • Dec 2003
    • 10598

    #1

    She was very too hot to be working in a gas station.

    I love it when they play hard to get. I found this cuty working in a gas station. She was very too hot to be working in a gas station. I use my money to convince her to stop to work for a little bit to talk with me. I try to talk about sex she only want to talk about her dream about getting married one day. It took me a long time for her to show me her tits. She shows me tits and then her boss comes outside so i have to pay him also to leave us alone. She makes soooooo good tits but it takes her along time to let me touch. They felt so fantastic and soft, and her pussy looked so good i gave her all the money i had to take her to the bathroom so i could feel her tits more while she sucked my dick and i fuck her pussy. She said she never saw a dick so big and was scared but not for too long.


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  • GlydeGirl
    Confirmed User
    • Feb 2005
    • 1516

    #2
    Sounds like a great fantasy... but I don't believe it happened in real life!

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    • wdsguy
      Ryde or Die
      • Dec 2002
      • 19568

      #3
      I've seen better stories written by a 5th grader.

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      • Rui
        web
        • Dec 2001
        • 9533

        #4
        "She makes soooooo good tits "...ehh

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        • Juilan
          Sultan of Swing
          • Feb 2004
          • 15141

          #5
          add: she smelled like gasoline and beef jerky, that always revs me up.
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          • Pornopat
            AdultTubeSubmits.com
            • Dec 2003
            • 10598

            #6
            Originally posted by Rui
            "She makes soooooo good tits "...ehh
            Yeah...that line gave it kind of away for me who wrote this crap...
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            • jacked
              sperm tail
              • May 2004
              • 11019

              #7
              back to school back too schoool

              you need some help with your story writing there killer
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              • Lifer
                Confirmed User
                • Feb 2004
                • 871

                #8
                Originally posted by Pornopat
                I try to talk about sex she only want to talk about her dream about getting married one day. It took me a long time for her to show me her tits. She shows me tits and then her boss comes outside so i have to pay him also to leave us alone.
                Sounds like Russian or Polish to me
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                • EroticySteve
                  Confirmed User
                  • Mar 2005
                  • 4365

                  #9
                  I think that there are some spelling and grammar issues, make a few "factual" corrections and it is a good start to a hot story.
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                  • Pornopat
                    AdultTubeSubmits.com
                    • Dec 2003
                    • 10598

                    #10
                    Originally posted by jacked
                    back to school back too schoool

                    you need some help with your story writing there killer
                    Hehehe its not mine!
                    You would be surprised if you knew where I took it from..
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                    • Project-Shadow
                      Confirmed User
                      • Feb 2003
                      • 7340

                      #11
                      Yeah.. i'd be upset if I paid someone to write that story as content.

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                      • Pornopat
                        AdultTubeSubmits.com
                        • Dec 2003
                        • 10598

                        #12
                        Originally posted by Lifer
                        Sounds like Russian or Polish to me
                        You are close! It sounds like the language of an eastern European pornstar we all know....
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                        • Pornopat
                          AdultTubeSubmits.com
                          • Dec 2003
                          • 10598

                          #13
                          Originally posted by Project-Shadow
                          Yeah.. i'd be upset if I paid someone to write that story as content.
                          The sad part is that the owners of the website are so rich they just dont care...
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                          • je_rome
                            Confirmed User
                            • Jul 2005
                            • 6846

                            #14
                            Originally posted by wdsguy
                            I've seen better stories written by a 5th grader.
                            I agree. it sounds so monotonous
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