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  • Flavio
    Registered User
    • Oct 2005
    • 36

    #1

    I've changed my site and looking for critiques

    Hi all,

    I recently posted my site here and asked for critique, but i've made some changes to it and was hoping to see what you all think on this version.

    http://www.boobsvillethumbs.com

    also, if anyone wants to trade hardlinks please hit me up at [email protected] , i don't have an ICQ number yet.

    thanks for all the help from everyone here already!
    Flavio


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  • Sebastian Sands
    Confirmed User
    • Mar 2005
    • 5223

    #2
    very good Flavio, iknow how hard you worked on it

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    • Rosecroix
      Registered User
      • Oct 2005
      • 11

      #3
      " It is your responsibility to know the rules, such as copyright laws. " ??

      not that anyone ever reads all that warning text, but come on
      By agreeing to these rules, you warrant that you will not post any messages that are obscene, vulgar, sexually-orientated, hateful, threatening, or otherwise violative of any laws.
      -- GFY Forum Rules

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      • mikeet
        this & that
        • May 2005
        • 5368

        #4
        Not bad

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        • Flavio
          Registered User
          • Oct 2005
          • 36

          #5
          thanks all - should i change what is there about the copyright laws?


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          • JoeMeca
            So Fucking Banned
            • Nov 2005
            • 2266

            #6
            boobsville earnings going well?

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            • Flavio
              Registered User
              • Oct 2005
              • 36

              #7
              too soon to say


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              • JoeMeca
                So Fucking Banned
                • Nov 2005
                • 2266

                #8
                Have you made any at all lol

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                • Amnesic
                  Confirmed User
                  • Oct 2004
                  • 1305

                  #9
                  I hate the warning page, not because it's not good, just because it is a warning page.
                  I want to jerk off, is this the kind of warning I need. Tell me not to hurt my penis or something, or tell me where the free porn is

                  btw you the banner at the bottom doesnt have a link.
                  and you should look at your keywords... you need some seo here

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                  • Flavio
                    Registered User
                    • Oct 2005
                    • 36

                    #10
                    seo...??
                    what is "seo"?

                    now, should i get rid of my warning page altogether? Is it a requirement to have a warning page? can i get away with not having a warning page?


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                    • nexcom28
                      So Fucking Banned
                      • Jan 2005
                      • 3716

                      #11
                      Also, why are you sending your 'leave' traffic to Yahoo! why not send them to a sponsor?

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                      • nexcom28
                        So Fucking Banned
                        • Jan 2005
                        • 3716

                        #12
                        Originally posted by Flavio
                        seo...??
                        what is "seo"?

                        now, should i get rid of my warning page altogether? Is it a requirement to have a warning page? can i get away with not having a warning page?
                        Search Engine Optimization, the art of making your page(s) search engine friendly.

                        You can get away without a warning page, but it's not recommended. Just add some spice to the text and add more keywords..

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                        • Flavio
                          Registered User
                          • Oct 2005
                          • 36

                          #13
                          i've made some of the suggested changes

                          Can anyone help me with the SEO?


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                          • Juilan
                            Sultan of Swing
                            • Feb 2004
                            • 15141

                            #14
                            Sure Flavio, download these 2 free trial SEO Software , and check your pages, and read the newsletters you will start learning quickly.
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                            • Flavio
                              Registered User
                              • Oct 2005
                              • 36

                              #15
                              i downloaded the .exe file but when i try to run it nothing happens. any help?


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                              • ared
                                Confirmed User
                                • Jul 2004
                                • 131

                                #16
                                Looks very nice! Maybe give your titles on top of your windows also a nice font type? But most of all I like the boobs!

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                                • Juilan
                                  Sultan of Swing
                                  • Feb 2004
                                  • 15141

                                  #17
                                  Originally posted by Flavio
                                  i downloaded the .exe file but when i try to run it nothing happens. any help?
                                  Are you on Apple? email [email protected] you will get help

                                  icq me if you have any other questions.
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                                  • dumphead
                                    Confirmed User
                                    • Nov 2005
                                    • 373

                                    #18
                                    the boobs are fine...your other graphics like the borders are in a mad quality, I can see many artefacts in that red frames and the color isn't the same as the background...

                                    And another font would look more professional...just my 2 cents. Keep that good work up!

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