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  • jMEGA
    Confirmed User
    • Oct 2005
    • 671

    #1

    Gallery Critique

    I made my first gallery in Photoshop. I would like to get some options on it. The good, bad and ugly.

    http://www.barelysafeforwork.com/hg/sng/redtop/

    Thanks peeps!
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  • ffmihai
    keep walking...
    • Jun 2002
    • 7177

    #2
    looks fine....its pretty simple.. i like it

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    • phogirl69
      Confirmed User
      • Jul 2001
      • 3330

      #3
      edited edited oops

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      • LiveDose
        Show Yer Tits!
        • Feb 2002
        • 25792

        #4
        Nice & clean now turn it into a sales page,,,

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        • Mefo
          Confirmed User
          • Jun 2002
          • 6169

          #5
          you have to many outside links

          I also wouldn't make the girl clickable but just add some more text links

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          • marttali
            Confirmed User
            • May 2003
            • 265

            #6
            at least make that "click here ... " stand out more or are you trying just to give out more free porn ?

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            • $5 submissions
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              • Nov 2003
              • 32189

              #7
              Originally posted by jMEGA
              I made my first gallery in Photoshop. I would like to get some options on it. The good, bad and ugly.

              http://www.barelysafeforwork.com/hg/sng/redtop/

              Thanks peeps!
              Looks good but you need to CONNECT the viewer of this gallery to the WEBSITE YOU ARE PUSHING. Good galleries act as "sample tastes" of what the site has. Also, content selection is key, if you're pushing a site that focuses on NICHE A, then have pics that show NICHE A material. Also, build up the NICHE PAIRING dynamic I mentioned above by putting in a mini bio or some text that DEMONSTRATES your knowledge of the particular niche. There should be some keywords in your text that tips off the consumer re a) how to react b) you know the niche you are pushing c) the niche material is in the site you're pushing.

              Best of luck and keep experimenting, finetuning, and elevating your game!

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              • Ace_luffy
                www.creationcrew.com
                • Feb 2005
                • 12170

                #8
                nice one... ;)


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                • Broda
                  Confirmed User
                  • Feb 2003
                  • 1874

                  #9
                  Bad composition. Too few pictures to get listed anywhere - since you're asking advice I assume you have zero partner accounts and as such don't waste your time submitting galleries with merely 14 pics. Use 15 at least - 16 is probably better.
                  NO blindlinking at all; never link a picture to the sponsor like you do here with the big background pic. Never.
                  Use only 2 outside links excluding recips, MAX, + 1 optional 2257 link; in that case, use max 3 recips where none of them have double-links in them.

                  The girl is sellable but why are you focussing on having all the clickable sales texts on top? They scroll out of the viewing area real quick and are not positioned where you'd assume the surfer puts his mousecursor.

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                  • Violetta
                    Affiliate
                    • Jul 2004
                    • 28735

                    #10
                    looks good!
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                    • jMEGA
                      Confirmed User
                      • Oct 2005
                      • 671

                      #11
                      Thanks for the comments and suggestions
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                      • mailman
                        Confirmed User
                        • Mar 2001
                        • 6311

                        #12
                        you're about 6 pics short of a gallery.

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                        • Sebastian Sands
                          Confirmed User
                          • Mar 2005
                          • 5223

                          #13
                          center the puppy

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