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Originally Posted by memphismonroe
angelo, what do you think the 2nd one should have to be fixed?
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Well... look at it this way:
First page
-On the first one, when you just clicked on it,
it takes you to a page where the first thing you see is a relatively big pic of you with a horny face and a hot ass in the air (not to mention the very nice quality compared to the second preview one)
Interest points: +1
-While the second one, shows text right away, and a little video on a side, while you have to scroll down before seeing some pics, and they arent of a great quality (i mean, the girl is of quality
but the picture seems blurry and of low resolutions)
Interest points: 0
-Text on both previews are like a wall... add some < br >'s betweemn the paragraphs =)
Page 2
-Once again, the new layout has no pictures. Sure, it has the little video again and some thumbs, but also the old one has them, and it has something more that turns people one more: a pic of you
Page 3
-Low resolution pic on new preview
(and i dont really like that pic... you have tons of better ones)
page 4
-both good, but new one has something missing... can you guess what it is?
page 5
-old=too empty, but it has some pics, which is good
-new=too much text...and no pics....
That's it from me i guess =)
And you should use a diffent font on the new one, it looks too plain that way
This critique okay?