My old tour vs. my new tour

The first one I like better, would fix a few things here and there, but both are good, just the first one is the better for me.

I like the general feel of #1 better.

That big block of text is too long. Its very hard to read.

You need to put more hardcore action on page 1. Current page is a bit boring.

I voted for 1

I like the first one better but they are both fine.

they both look pretty good but the first one is what i would go with.

The first one is much easier to read. You could try breaking the text information into smaller blocks around the graphics more. Or add a collage of photos instead of one large picture.

I prefer the first one.... =)

But if fixed, the second one can also look better

angelo, what do you think the 2nd one should have to be fixed?

Both have to much text and not enough pics...

I don't understand why you want to change it, the first one is way better!!

Well... look at it this way:
First page
-On the first one, when you just clicked on it,
it takes you to a page where the first thing you see is a relatively big pic of you with a horny face and a hot ass in the air (not to mention the very nice quality compared to the second preview one)
Interest points: +1
-While the second one, shows text right away, and a little video on a side, while you have to scroll down before seeing some pics, and they arent of a great quality (i mean, the girl is of quality but the picture seems blurry and of low resolutions)
Interest points: 0
-Text on both previews are like a wall... add some < br >'s betweemn the paragraphs =)

Page 2
-Once again, the new layout has no pictures. Sure, it has the little video again and some thumbs, but also the old one has them, and it has something more that turns people one more: a pic of you

Page 3
-Low resolution pic on new preview
(and i dont really like that pic... you have tons of better ones)

page 4
-both good, but new one has something missing... can you guess what it is?


page 5
-old=too empty, but it has some pics, which is good
-new=too much text...and no pics....

That's it from me i guess =)
And you should use a diffent font on the new one, it looks too plain that way



This critique okay?

the 2nd one is seriously terrible, i hope you are not paying for it.

#1 is 1000x better imo.

the new one is better for me

First one. Needs more thumbnail pics of you. Give the surfers eyes lots to take in with various body parts and poses etc.

If I'm going to join this site, I want to know the real memphis monroe. Sure, I wanna see super starlet memphis, but i also want to feel like i'm getting to know a side of memphis we don't see normally, the one that's a horny nympho no matter what she's doing, whether she's cooking dinner, playing solitaire or masturbating in front of an episode of Murder She Wrote.

Give the people more hardcore shots, and make them shots that don't all look like you're posing for a magazine spread. If I'm interested in joining this site, I'm interested in the behind-the-scenes memphis. show me a little.

Best advice yet. "Look" of a site is great, but content is KING!