02-04-2007, 10:47 AM
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Originally Posted by BoyAlley
Ok, here's advice from the always fashion oriented gay homosexual.
1. Quit putting so god damn much makeup on her, you're making her look like a cheap little diseased whore.
2. Tell her to quit dying her hair jet black.
3. Don't start getting into the whole, I'm an evil bitch holding a knife getting ready to cut off your dick routine. You're going to dance around obscenity lines that a lot of affiliates aren't comfortable with, and limit your audience.
4. Pick a look and go with it. Is she a skanky whore wearing bad makeup, a sweet innocent type, a girl nextdoor, a goth chick, or a flat out psycho bitch? Pick an "niche" and stick with it.
I think if you turned her into a "normal looking" woman, you might have something.
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Very good advice there. The make is way too much and I agree you need to choose a specific look. That last pic is creepy.
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