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Originally Posted by ProPorn
You need to hire a native english speaker to write your sales text. 
I'm not making fun of you. Your english is good enough for the forums, but the way you use words is ... unusual. It makes sense, but still doesn't sound right. It's a tricky grammar thing and I can appreciate it would be difficult to grasp if english is not your first language.
While we can tell the girls are not american, it would still help in selling to an american audience. The rest of the site looks great. Talented designer. |
Agreed
Why do people think it's OK to use shit English when trying to do business?
It looks bad and sounds bad. It says to me that you don't even have enough money to go and hire a translator for a couple of hours.
Not trying to get at you, just common sense... if you're trying to sell something to someone, don't offend them by slaughtering their lanuage.