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Old 08-23-2006, 01:56 PM  
Paul Markham
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Ernest Hemingway used a typewriter but it does not make him a typist, a chef uses a steak, but it does not make him a butcher. We use cameras but it does not make us photographers.

We create a fantasy in the mind of the viewer. We can use words to back up the images. But what ever words you use they have to be confirmed by the images.

No good you saying this.

"Susie was so hot and horny her tight teen cunt was yearning to feel a huge throbbing cock slide inside her and pound her young tight body to a shuddering orgasm"

If she is looking like this "While Suzie was posing nude she was wondering what time the bus left"

Both texts are extreme but does it help you to get the point. Think about what the model is thinking then write the text and there you have the fantasy that will convert at a better rate.
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