How does this design look for my new TGP?

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  • sickbeatz
    The Hustler
    • Feb 2005
    • 4993

    #1

    How does this design look for my new TGP?

    http://www.stickysquirt.com/main.html

    I bougth the domain the other day, been working on it for the last hour trying to get somethign that looks some what okay

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  • Babaganoosh
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    • Nov 2001
    • 15841

    #2
    Jesus...just stop.
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    • mistress69
      Confirmed User
      • Feb 2005
      • 2804

      #3
      my eyes don't like it

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      • el_greco
        Confirmed User
        • Nov 2002
        • 352

        #4
        Not a bad start...but that white on grey is horribly hard to see...
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        • boner 2.0
          Too lazy to set a custom title
          • Jul 2004
          • 10970

          #5
          Add contrast, its too hard to read

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          • fitzmulti
            I Like Depth Of Field!
            • Jan 2003
            • 14861

            #6
            Originally posted by sickbeatz
            http://www.stickysquirt.com/main.html

            I bougth the domain the other day, been working on it for the last hour trying to get somethign that looks some what okay
            I agree, too hard to read - and your logo at the top is about 300% too high...


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            • GiantGnome
              Confirmed User
              • Jan 2004
              • 4344

              #7
              youre kidding right?
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              • BastarD
                Confirmed User
                • Apr 2004
                • 6341

                #8
                Can you please design 5 tgps for me please? I will pay you 2k bucks for each!

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                • pornguy
                  Too lazy to set a custom title
                  • Mar 2003
                  • 62910

                  #9
                  It is a little dim. I would make some of the colors darker.
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                  • eMonk
                    Confirmed User
                    • Aug 2003
                    • 2310

                    #10
                    it's very hard to read bro... =-)

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                    • 0000000000000000000001000
                      Confirmed User
                      • Jan 2005
                      • 243

                      #11
                      Contrast

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                      • James White
                        Confirmed User
                        • Apr 2004
                        • 1405

                        #12
                        Wow, talk about a design that sells itself.
                        SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60. Let me repeat... A 120 x 60 button and no more that 3 lines of DEFAULT SIZE AND COLOR text.

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                        • Lycanthrope
                          Confirmed User
                          • Jan 2004
                          • 4517

                          #13
                          You may want to consider a career in quick culinary arts

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                          • Dynamix
                            G F Y not
                            • Jan 2004
                            • 2910

                            #14
                            www.tgpfactory.com - i'm running a $35 special right now.

                            everyone that has said contrast is certainly right. the light gray on a tad darker gray makes it hard to identity where the content boxes are.

                            white on gray for headers and text are barely visible.

                            link color (brownish orange) doesn't match the marroon header. always consider a unified color scheme, you did so with the grays although they need more contrast.

                            best of luck to you

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