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cutiesoncam.com

I had to change servers, so what started as a blog is now a free site. I'll add the blog later. What do you think?

The site looks alright. Few suggestions; the first thing I saw when visiting your site was half a ton of text, if im surfing for porn the last thing i want to see is a shit load of text, so maybe think about making that less prominent.

think about making your pics smaller and have loads more of them, this is where the money is, so give users shit loads of choice + if theres shit loads of conent they'll come back for more.

so generally the site has potential !

I think it?s a good start. Those keywords you are targeting are highly competitive, so you have to get hundreds if not thousands of one way links to your index with those keywords as anchor text.

I mention that because I?m assuming that is the point of the text. If you decide to make the site more sales oriented take lukeump?s advice. I would also say add more pics and link them to bios on your site that link directly to the join page.