I'm also a skilled editor... Didn't like it at all.. Didn't grab or make me enthuised to want to watch more... Music is good to put into trailers but if u decide to not use music... At least have some on-time editing going on... This trailer was simply a go across the raw video and just soft fade it down to a trailer... If you're in need of an editor... I can work something out for ya...
PS,
I did like the story line though...
