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Old 04-24-2006, 04:23 PM  
alan-l
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Originally Posted by thinkx
ok 1 serious advice : SMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILEY pics

no smile = no sales
ditto

I already told you about some improvement in the tours, the way they're now they look like you have only 3-4 sets. The tight fetish site (which, btw, tight fetish is not specially related to jeans) looks like you put the tour up but you don't really want to sell, it's kinda plain and nothing that "jumps" to the view. If you did it by yourself, maybe try a pro designer. If you hired a designer for this... well, don't use him/her again.

If you ask me, I'd expand the site to cover its name in full, you've a great domain being misused. Add spandex, latex, tight leather, lycra, vynil, rubber, nylon... guess you get the point

As for Katina site: She has kinda harsh face, very slavic, you really really REALLY need her to smile. Else change her to domina or something

Magi Missy tour: if you make her smile, you have something there. Besides, why are you linking samples to full galleries? You're giving everything for free and furthermore, the galleries showcase photos with poor lightning and to add up to all that, you've 4 samples, 3 of them linked to the same gallery which doen't even content the pic in the thumbnail. Get somebody to make you those 4 samples IN A GREAT LOOKING JPG (as opposite to full gallery) and then put then in html pages displaying only that pic and *click* *enter* *see more* kind of stuff. You'd try Harvey from FDSign, he's the king of pre-join promo, check his meatcash site designs and you'll see what I mean, if you've a CC, YOU'LL BUY, no questions about that

as for traffic... yes, you need traffic, but if you've great sites, traffic will come alone. ie, if you change the jeans site tour, I'd send some traffic, now I see it as a waste. Sorry if it sounds harsh, but I'm giving you my advice trying to help you
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