I won't share mine, but you have offered nothing special to the visitor. Seen those types of pages thousands of times. Remember that a (small) percentage of them are clicking just out of curiosity, or because they don't speak English and think they might be able to get more for free.
There doesn't have to be anything specific wrong with your page if you're getting poor sales from it. Usually it isn't possible to say something like "oh... change the font" or "align to the right" or maybe the site itself doesn't appeal like it should. If I were to point at everything that I thought was "wrong" or could be improved then I'd be here all day. Work on getting the maximum ctr, then tweak, tweak, tweak, tweak, tweak, tweak, tweak. Also build and host your own tour on the best (fastest, reliable) possible hosting, and use light exit consoles. There are many little touches to add and so many sales methods/strategies that I could talk forever. But I don't want to help anyone.
You get the idea.