1.) Chubby/Fat girls are not "Dimes"
2.) Tour is BAD, looks like a 12y/o designed it
3.) Larger Images / Video Trailers
4.) Little things such as naming the pages, (not "index1 - whatever")
5.)
http://www.gstacks.com/galleries_03/...?ccbill=XXXXXX - Girl on left ???
6.) Spend another year researching the industry and meet some people. You will soon realize, if you haven't already that this is an extremly competative business - compare your site to the competition and decide which one you would spend your lunch money on.
(Everything above is meant to help, I do not know how long you have been at this, but you have a ways to go. Trial and Error are a part of earning your stripes in this biz.) GOOD LUCK
