Overall not bad for a first effort.
I'd swap out some of the fonts, though. They look somewhat dated and kinda' retro. And I agree with the other comment about the drop shadows being somewhat over-used.
Pink text on pink background is a little difficult to read.
And the compositing needs some additional work in places (dark blue background showing through the model's hair in one of the pics near the bottom).
Seen worse over the years. A little tweak and polish and it'll be better.
Just my
