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Originally Posted by Tempest
You need more space at the bottom of the gallery so when they scroll down, the link is easier to get access to.
You've only got 2 links to the site.. the first is hidden in some text at the top. So basically you've only got 1 and it's nothing "exciting".. nothing to really entice them into clicking thru to the site.
The text in the middle is useless since everything else over powers it.. Cut down the verbage, bump up the size, make some "bold" and put a link there with a "call to action".. i.e. "Click Here NOW To Watch Her Big Tits Bounce"
The "free tour" link at the bottom is also "boring" needs to be a call to action. Mention the free tour up top or something but tell the mindless surfers to click and join or something like that. Better yet.. Click Here To Join And Watch Her Big Tits Get Fucked. Too much verbage but you get the idea.. Or right above a link that says "Enter Here To Watch The Video", you put some text "This Sexy Blonde Gets Those Big Tits Fucked On Camera". This sort of text always seems cheesy or to "blatent".. but it works.
The guys are horny and they want more.. You need to find the right words/phrases and pictures to push them over the edge to buy. Keep it very short, to the point, keyed directly to the baser instincts.. Understand?
Overall the gallery looks nice though and the girl is great.
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Thanks for this, will do something about it.