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Originally Posted by baddog
back on topic, just scanning the first paragraph, it could easily be broken up into 2 or 3 paragraphs thus increasing the likelihood that someone would read it.  |
Actually, on reflection, I now see FOUR paragraphs that it could've been. That'll teach me to do "it" the old-fashioned way that the nuns at St Peter's Academy pushed back in grade school English class (I musta failed that one, too:-)).
Actually, I was sorta in a "ranting" mode and just went wild with the length of that first paragraph.
Meanwhile, do you think DOJ reads GFY? If so, I might now have a target on my back?
Dave