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baddog · 12-13-2005, 05:14 PM

back on topic, just scanning the first paragraph, it could easily be broken up into 2 or 3 paragraphs thus increasing the likelihood that someone would read it.

12-13-2005, 05:14 PM
baddog So Fucking Banned Industry Role: Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: the beach, SoCal Posts: 107,089	back on topic, just scanning the first paragraph, it could easily be broken up into 2 or 3 paragraphs thus increasing the likelihood that someone would read it.