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All affiliates of Paul Markham Teens and customers of Paul Markham Content Store are eligible. For every sign up an affiliate sends we give him one raffle ticket. On the content stores, for every $50 spent at one time we give the customer a ticket. Then at the end of March we make a live draw and the two winners win a trip of a lifetime.
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That is pretty much ok, not much to add to that. I would just clean up the English a bit (I assume most of your affiliates / customers are English speaking). Some of it is broken.
