Max, its no secret, you are amongst the top shooters here. Great content! I love the fact that you use extremely hot girls as your photographers.
The video you posted is awesome, you cut straight to the chase, great editing to.
I've told you this before, don't let things run too long. Its a great vid mind you, but remember that the attention span of your average viewer isn't that long. So keep it short and sweet.
Other than that, you've almost attained pure perfection my friend.
Now all you need is a good compositor like me to snazz things up
haha
Cheers bro