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Originally Posted by holograph
some spice.. need to grab attention right from the first moment it starts playing, maybe few stills of girls, site logo changing fast or flashing type of video effect in a way like bam bam bam  or maybe a narration of whats being written, your GF's background voice is sexy but was too repetative on "taking off" part throughout the trailer, if she could talk more it'd be also attracite, imho.
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on another thought, if you could make (just an idea) black text screens shorter in time in the beginning that could do it.. like one text screen for a second or two and then vids started.. i could be well out of line here and the trailer is good as, it is i guess i have to see it in the morning or something.