Originally Posted by MetroPornTour

This girl would clean up really nice with a bit of make up and better lighting.

On that note, you need a bit of practice on the lighting. Digital is cheap and it's great but it is waaay to sharp and unforgiving on a model. When you shoot with digital you really have to get your lights and backgrounds perfected to an art.

And personally I wouldn't shoot any model with a camera that doesn't have a glass lens. But thats a personal preference.