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Well the guy certainly knows how to composite stuff. Probably took him a little while to piece that together (unless he used a template from a previous project). The intro is good if you're looking to make this type a thing on a regular basis (which I figure you will).
I don't want to nit-pick, but there are a few flaws in his animation... but other than that its alright!
The problem with the actual trailer is that he doesn't know on what to focus to get us hot. We see alot of body shots, but we don't see 'em long enough to get a good look and turn us on. He jumps to a few close-ups of her face, but we don't see it long enough to make any "contact" with her. Basically he's jumping back and forth too much trying to keep to the beat of the music.
Now the only REAL problem I see is the sound. He needs to adjust his levels a bit more so that we can properly hear what she's saying.
Oh and never underestimate the power of a strait cut. No need for flashy transitions every time.
Thats my 2 cents
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