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Old 07-05-2002, 05:36 AM  
EvilAL
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Join Date: Jun 2002
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Hypo

...your site looks good on my 600 x 800, but bro...you should really consider bolding some of that text...and using headlines and subheadlines. As the text is, it sort of just blends into the back ground, and nothing catches the readers eye or pulls them through the copy. A few subheadlines and bolding a few key benifits would make a world of difference to your site.

(you also might want to chill with the ! after every sentance...kinda screems H-Y-P-E)

Just sayin, not dissin.

EA
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