Hey S.O.S. Hope things turned for the better for you
Only thing I saw that FLEW out at me as somehting I would change was the top right pic on the first page - That pic doesn't do her justice

It's amazing how a slight angle change can alter the way a woman looks soooo much. Since you are trying to THROW SEX APPEAL in the surfers face on the first page they see loaded that pic should have the same raw sex appeal the other 'sexier' pictures of her on the tour do...
Maybe it's just me?? But for a single girl model picture I am sure oyu have a better one that would fit up there ... Some skin, maybe a underwear shot from the side with her tugging at her panties and back arched the right way etc... Sure you can find one

And like I said, may just be me on that one pic