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FWIW - the text where your girl talks to the surfer is weak - at least on the first page.
And from my experience you can count on losing around 25% of your surfers for each new page they have to move to - so if you have a three page tour and 200 surfers hit the front by page two your down to 150 and even less will go throught to the join page.
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