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Originally Posted by AlienQ
Typos, repetative text, typos
FOT MORE?
Wazzat?
GOod color dynamic but ya need more incentives to click through to the tour.
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did you read when I wrote "rough draft"? He is still cleaning up the gallery and will do the sales text... thats just filler. I wouldnt post a final edit on GFY for someone to splice and then use forthemselves, leaving me to pay for it ;)